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Gunthry by FaluuVaud Gunthry by FaluuVaud
This is a little something i worked up for my brother last night while we were webcaming ^^ Its of his Lombax OC Gunthry ^^ Its still very sketchy and unfinished, but i really liked it :) My favorite part... His eyes ^^ I love how the eyes came out :)

Jen
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OneLuckyStar Featured By Owner Jul 7, 2010  Hobbyist General Artist
If you do not mind, I'm going to give some feedback on this great sketch! ^^
First, I have to compliment your brother's design for this OC. It is unique and has individuality. I also love the name, Gunthry.
Now, the face. You have great reason to be proud of the eyes. This is only a sketch, but when you look at it, the eyes appear the be final draft form. The way you shaded and highlighted them is just very high quality for a sketch. However, I feel the adding more detail to the facial features would have really added to the picture. For example, I see that you added a bit of an arc to the nose by the left eye. This is great, but by adding a little more to the arc ON the nosemight help. You did add a little there, but some more would REALLY add. The last thing about the head and face is the chin looks a bit triangle-ish. I know this is just a sketch, but I can tell you went over the line several time this way. Adding a bit of a curve would help.
I really can't say much on the body; it looks great. But, I do have to mention that the right arm looks slightly seperated from the body. You defined the muscules and such good, so over the body is great.
I guess that is all I can say, but this is overall great. ^^
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FaluuVaud Featured By Owner Jul 8, 2011  Student General Artist
sorry this is so late, I haven't been keeping up here as well as I used to ^^; thank you very much for your critique ^^ I enjoyed reading your comments :)
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KaffeKane Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010
He kinda looks like he's about to go into "full-blown pout mode". Like something just made him a sad panda.

Gunthry: But I'm not a panda! :iconidontloveitplz: I'll get you for that later, ya know... :iconsneakylionplz:
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FaluuVaud Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2010  Student General Artist
lol XD I wasn't sure what kind of expression you wanted. i was supposed to be for a kind of moc up for your cover ^^;
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KaffeKane Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2010
His expression on the cover of the pilot issue's going to be quite different from that. I still like this, though.

Is there going to be a colored version?
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FaluuVaud Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2010  Student General Artist
probably ^^
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